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This is the letter I plan to send to TransUnion regarding an account they supposedly updated but didn't. Advice is needed. I'm sending it out today. Thanks.

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TransUnion
PO Box 2000
Chester PA 19022-2000

October 18, 2001


Dear Sir/Madame:

This letter is a formal request for the description of the procedures used to determine the accuracy and completeness of the disputed information, including the business name, address, and telephone number of any furnisher of information contacted in connection with this reinvestigation.

For your benefit, and as a gesture of my goodwill, I will restate the relevant dispute:

Cross Country Bank, Account #

As already stated, the listed item is inaccurate and incomplete, and is a very serious error in reporting. In your previous update to me, you indicated that this account had updated information. I am enclosing a copy of my original report as well as the â??updatedâ? copy. As you will see, there is no update whatsoever. This proves that this account was not verified and you violated the law. I am disappointed that you have failed to maintain reasonable procedures to assure complete accuracy in the information you publish, and insist you comply with the law by providing the requested information within the 15 days allowed or delete this account in itâ??s entirety.


Thank you.

 

anyone????????????

 

Will do. Thanks for the advice.

 

Good idea, Erica. I'll do that.

 

I would not send them the one you blacked out but make a copy of it and send that instead as some times the items blacked out can be seen through the black out or can be read when you hold the paper up to the light!
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I noticed this while marking over the info and did just as you've suggested. Thanks for the advice, though.