read my PFB letter before I send->

Discussion in 'Credit Talk' started by ero2, Jul 28, 2003.

  1. ero2

    ero2 Well-Known Member

    I hope you are able to help me with a problem I've encountered with Bank of America. The problem concerns the financing at your bank. .

    On July 28, 2003 I applied for a BofA visa platinum and was denied online. I would like a manual review of my application be done, as I believe I should have qualified for this card. I have an installment loan through BofA, and also checking and savings accounts. I have good credit history, never a late payment, no derogs and think that the reasons given do not justify my denial. I have done a lot of research and found that your card with a 9.9 fixed rate would be the best for me as I will be going to grauate school soon and may need to carry fairly large balances. The reasons given online are #of revolvoving accounts with balances, this does not hold up because I am only carrying a balance on 2 cards: chase platinum 186.32, and my best buy card of 1151.28. Also, the chase card is the only "new" account that I am carrying a balnce on as the best buy card is 2 years old, and all of my other credit cards are paid off at the end of every month. The average age of my accounts is low because I am only 21, I haven't had that much time to have credit cards yet. Now to the final denial reason, too many inquiries in the last 5 months, I have these inquiries because I was shopping for a loan for my truck and decided to go with a loan from BofA. Also, the intial denial reason was because I incorrectly inputted my gross household annual income, it is 162,500.(just based on that my mom may quit her job soon)

    In the future I might just take my business to other banks, and I don't know whether I can recommend you to others.

    Here's the resolution I propose: I would like to ask that my application be manually reviewed and your decision to deny me a BofA platinum visa be overturned. I appreciate very much you looking into this and hopefully will be able to approve my application. I am asking that you please give me a chance despite your online denial because I am a very responsible customer and have never been late or had any derogs on my credit in the 3 years I have had credit.

    Thank you for your consideration in this matter. I look forward to your prompt reply.
     
  2. GEORGE

    GEORGE Well-Known Member

    REMOVE---->(just based on that my mom may quit her job soon)

    $ ON INCOME
     
  3. ero2

    ero2 Well-Known Member

    I just put that on here, it is not on the actual PFB letter, anything else you think I should add or delete GEORGE?
     
  4. jlynn

    jlynn Well-Known Member

    Just my .02 cents

    You spelled graduate wrong (if you copied and pasted) I actually had a good laugh on that :)!

    I wouldn't mention you are about to carry a fairly large balance, and also I wouldn't mention your age the two together look really really bad. (How many of us said they screwed up in their younger years?)

    I don't understand the input about hhld income and your Mom quitting her job???

    I wouldn't give specifics on the revolving balances. Tell them it doesn't make sense as you only allow two cards to revolve, and one the balance is less than $200.

    I might explain that x of x inquiries are during one shopping trip for an auto.

    "In the future" - I personally hate those canned sentences at PFB - I always take them out.

    I would cut out everything in the last paragraph starting with " I am asking that you please..."

    Again, this is what I would do, others with B of A PFB experience might have better suggestions.
     
  5. ero2

    ero2 Well-Known Member

    How about this one?


    I hope you are able to help me with a problem I've encountered with Bank of America. The problem concerns the financing at your bank. .

    On July 28, 2003 I applied for a BofA visa platinum and was denied online. I would like a manual review of my application be done, as I believe I should have qualified for this card. I have an installment loan through BofA, and also checking and savings accounts. I have good credit history, never a late payment, no derogs and think that the reasons given do not justify my denial. I have done a lot of research and found that your card with a 9.9 fixed rate would be the best for me. The reasons given online are #of revolvoving accounts with balances, this does not hold up because I am only carrying a balance on 2 cards: chase platinum, and my best buy card. Also, the chase card is the only "new" account that I am carrying a balnce on as the best buy card is 2 years old, and all of my other credit cards are paid off at the end of every month. The average age of my accounts is low because I only have 3 yers of credit history but if you will look i have 3 years of perfect payment history on all cards. Now to the final denial reason, too many inquiries in the last 5 months, I have these inquiries because I was shopping for a loan for my truck, which 2 of the 3 inquiries are from, and decided to go with a loan from BofA. Also, the intial denial reason was because I incorrectly inputted my gross household annual income, after a call to 1-302-741-1825 it should have been corrected to $162,500.

    Here's the resolution I propose: I would like to ask that my application be manually reviewed and your decision to deny me a BofA platinum visa be overturned. I appreciate very much you looking into this and hopefully will be able to approve my application.

    Thank you for your consideration in this matter. I look forward to your prompt reply.
     
  6. ero2

    ero2 Well-Known Member

    and I will go through and fix the capitals I missed and spelling:)
     
  7. jlynn

    jlynn Well-Known Member

    Re: Re: read my PFB letter before I send->

    Much better! The last two things I would fix

    delete - do not justify denial. Sounds a little offensive (how does HE know what justifies denial??)
    "never a late payment, nor any derogatory entries."

    delete - does not hold up - same reason

    "with balances. I am only carrying..."
     
  8. ero2

    ero2 Well-Known Member

    Re: Re: read my PFB letter before I send->

    now they won't jack the rates on my loan because I am sending this right? This is not gonna get me into trouble?
     
  9. jlynn

    jlynn Well-Known Member

    They shouldn't be able to jack your rate on a closed-end installment account. I've never heard of it. Your loan papers agreed to a specific rate.
     
  10. GEORGE

    GEORGE Well-Known Member

    FIXED RATE...it could only change if it was VARIABLE and tied to PRIME...and PRIME WOULD HAVE TO GO UP!!!
     
  11. ero2

    ero2 Well-Known Member

    yup, just asked my mom, it's fixed. How do you get contacted when you do a PFB, do they call or send you an email or snail mail or any of the above?
     
  12. GEORGE

    GEORGE Well-Known Member

    Re: Re: read my PFB letter before I send->

    BofA phone call from some lady...HER NAME HAS BEEN MENTIONED BEFORE...
     
  13. ero2

    ero2 Well-Known Member

    Re: Re: read my PFB letter before I send->

    should I have left my PFB letter public, I chose to send it private, and now after doing a search have found that almost all of the people that did public got cards and people who did private did not have so much luck. Anything I can do now? Any numbers for BofA I should try?
     
  14. catnap1972

    catnap1972 Well-Known Member

    Re: Re: Re: read my PFB letter before I send->

    Depends on if you want the smart-@$$ commentary from the peanut gallery there.
     
  15. ero2

    ero2 Well-Known Member

    Re: Re: Re: read my PFB letter before I send->

    nah, that's okay:)

    I just wondered if it was as effective if it was not public? Also, I have heard that this great, wonderful Robin is no longer with BofA or something in a different thread...does anyone know if this is true? I think she may be my only hope.
     

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